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书面表达别出心裁 关键词：书面表达；出彩；词汇；句式；连接词 在高考试卷上写出别出心裁、独具匠心的文章，博得阅卷教师的好感，获得理想的分数，这不仅是学生思考的问题，也是高三老师们讨论的重要内容。 高考书面表达旨在考查考生根据题示运用书面语进行交际的能力。考生应能：①准确使用语法和词汇；②使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚，连贯地表达自己的意思。书面表达对学生语言生成能力要求较高，考生要获得高分，应深刻理解书面表达评分标准第五档的给分范围和要求，在打好句子表达基本功的基础上采取一些相应的策略。 一、尽量选用高级词汇、短语 从评分标准可以看出，高考书面表达提倡与鼓励考生使用高级词汇，因此考生在考场书面表达中要尽可能使用一些高级表达方式以提高文章的表达效果，提升文章的表达档次。 [例1]一般表达：because it rained heavily, the sports meeting was delayed. 高级表达：it rained dogs and cats, as a consequence, the sports meeting had to be put off. [例2]一般表达：when he was young, he wanted to learn everything. 高级表达：as a young man, he had a strong appetite for everything. 二、句式表达力求灵活多变 1.使用分词（短语）、with复合结构，使句子简单明了，严密紧凑。 [例1]一般表达：our school lies at the foot of a mountain, there is a river flowing in front of it. 高级表达：at the foot of mountain lies our school, with a river flowing in front of it. [例2]一般表达：when he walked out of the park, the old men happened to see the road accident. 高级表达：when walking out of the park, the old man happened to witness the road accident. 2.使用被动句式，突出表达中的重点。 [例1]一般表达：the local government should take measures to solve the problem. 高级表达：effective measures should be taken by the local government to solve the problem. [例2]一般表达：we should do something to protect the environment. 高级表达：something should be done to protect the environment. 3.使用倒装句，打破单一的“主+谓”或“主+系+表”结构，使句序活泼、生动。 [例1]一般表达：we can achieve our goal in this way. 层次提升：only in this way can we achieve our goal. [例2]一般表达：as soon as we arrived, we began to set up our tent. 层次提升：no sooner had we arrived than we began to set up our tent. 4.使用强调句式，突出重点。 [例1]一般表达：his great efforts helped him out of the trouble. 层次提升：it was his great efforts that helped him out of the trouble. [例2]一般表达：the other part of the student think they are often disturbed by the noises in the classroom. 层次提升：the other part of the students think it is the noises in the classroom that often disturb them. 5.使用主从复合句，避免过多的简短句式，使句式复杂、多变、灵活。 [例1]一般表达：to our surprised, the little girl knows so many t