对外经贸大学英语翻译硕士考研参考书目，考研真题，考研经验，考研资料—句子修辞讲义之ChoppySentences.pdfVIP

六年专注考研专业课辅导 Rewriting Choppy Sentences (from Oshima, Alice and Ann Hogue. 1999 Writing Academic English, Third Edition. Longman, White Plains, NY) Choppy sentences are sentences that are too short. Although short sentences can be effective, overuse of them is considered poor style in academic writing. In order to correct choppy sentences just combine them into a compound or a complex sentence. Note: your decision to make a compound or a complex sentence should be based on whether the ideas in the short sentence are equal or whether on idea is dependent on the other. CHOPPY SENTENCES Wind is an enduring source of power. Water is also an unlimited energy source. Dams produce hydraulic power. They have existed for a long time. Windmills are relatively new. CORRECTED Both wind and water are enduring sources of power. Dams produce hydraulic power for a long time, but windmills are relatively new. COPPY SENTENCES We must find new sources of energy. Natural sources of energy are decreasing. Solar energy is a promising new source of energy. Solar energy is energy from the sun. CORRECTED We must find new sources of energy because natural sources of energy are decreasing. Solar energy, which is energy from the sun, is a promising new source. 句子修辞讲义之Choppy Sentences 育明教育全国统一咨询热线：010 咨询QQ：1559022430 生命在于奋斗，拼搏就是希望；失败只有一种，那就是放弃努力！—育明寄语