2012届高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评三课件（开放式作文）.pptVIP

* 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You’re asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. 参考词汇：cactus 仙人掌（可数名词） 讲评 本篇开放作文的漫画非常简洁，画面中所出现的道具、人物和背景也非常简单：道具是一把伞；人物是两株仙人掌（一大一小）；背景是沙漠和太阳。本篇开放作文的写作的关键在于对漫画主题的恰当定位。对主题的定位最佳的是“父母对孩子的溺爱”；也可以定位为“父母对孩子的关爱”。但是定位为“父母对孩子的溺爱”，应该写起来更容易上手。要防止跑题：比如：从人与自然的关系上讲，认为缺水，要加强环保意识，改善环境；从人与人的关系上讲，认为要互相帮助；从大仙人掌撑着一把伞的画面上看，归纳出“不顾自己照顾别人”的主题等等都是跑了题。 在炎热的太阳照射下的沙漠上，有两株仙人掌 （一大一小），大的为小的撑着一把伞以保护 小的免受炎热太阳的伤害。从画面上看，即使 如此，小仙人掌好像经不起炎热太阳的考验。 具体表达时，可以采取拟人化的手段，把大仙 人掌比喻为母亲，小仙人掌比喻为孩子，表达 起来更为方便。 ①As is shown in the picture, there are two cactuses growing in a large area of desert. The big cactus—Mother is holding an umbrella to protect the small cactus—her baby from being injured by the hot sun. But even if it is under the umbrella of Mother, the baby seems to be unable to stand the hot sunshine. ②As we can see in the picture, in a large area of desert, a big cactus is holding an umbrella for a small cactus in a very hot day. But the small one in the shade seems very weak .The big cactus is very upset, but she cannot find any solutions. ③Looking at the picture, I can see two cactuses growing in a large area of desert. The mother cactus is holding an umbrella to protect the baby cactus from the baking sun. But against her good wish. the baby cactus is bending down and turning weak in the shade of the umbrella. 我们将漫画的主题定位为“父母对孩子的溺爱” 漫画中的大小仙人掌 —象征父母与孩子 炎热的太阳和沙漠 —象征困难和恶力的环境 撑着的伞 —象征父母为孩子提供的庇护 ①The big cactus is just like parents while the small cactus is their child. And the hot sun is the difficulties and bad environment. Parents always want to protect their child and keep away from those difficulties and problems. The picture conveys us the message that parents spoil their children too much. ②The picture reminds me of what happens in our daily life. Like the mother cactus in the picture, parents are trying their best to take good ca