2014年英语议论文写作指导(对比分析---正反观点).pptVIP

Practice in class 面对繁重的高中学习任务，高中生对参加学校活动 有着不同的看法，请以Taking Part in School Activities 为题，用英文写一篇120词左右的短文，着重介绍两种 不同的观点和态度，最后谈谈你个人的看法。 ▲很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识， 又可以得到放松； ▲不少学生漠不关心，认为学生就应该学习，学校活 动与学习无关，同时嘲讽积极参加学校活动的学生。 标题和开头已给，不计入总词数。词数；120词左右。 Taking Part in School Activities As for school activities, students mainly hold two views． Main errors 1.时态：现在的时态 2. There are many students support it. There are many students who support it. There are many students supporting it 3. 要有清晰的、完整的句子的痕迹 Those in favor of…think it is good for us. Because it can help us get relaxed. Main errors Those in favor of…think it is good for us, because it can help us get relaxed. Those in favor of…think it is good for us. It is because it can help us get relaxed. 清晰的句子的痕迹 It can help us make many friends, they will give us many proposer. It can help us make many friends. They will give us many proposer. It can help us make many friends, and they will give us many proposer. Main errors Taking Part in School Activities As for school activities, students mainly hold two views. Many students are very enthusiastic about school activities because they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task and they should take any chance to get some practical knowledge. Besides, after long hours’ study, they can relax themselves by participating in school activities. However, a large group of students take little interest in them and spend most of their time on study. They believe that they should make full use of time to study and that school activities have little to do with their further development. Thus sometimes they even laugh at those who take an active part in school activities. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the first view. On the one hand, we can learn a great deal from other students we meet in activities. Furthermore, modern society requires many qualities of young students, so “book worms” can’t keep up with