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english essay-英文essay范文两例English Essay 1: Finding what you have lost；English Essay 2: Giving advice about health由代写essay中心提供整理资源。 english essay-英文essay范文两例English Essay 1: Finding what you have lost；English Essay 2: Giving advice about health由代写essay中心提供整理资源。 English Essay 1: Finding what you have lost I am an e(C)(E)ngineer, job folder is very important for my work. When I work in (AR)(a)laboratory, I always keep the folder in my hand, I can write down anything that I find during (AR)(the)experiments. It is convenitent(SP)(convenient) for me. I lost m/essayfw/19597.htmly (D)()one of my folders yesterday. It was just missing. I looked for it in my office and laboratory, I asked everyone, I couldnt find it out. (I(x))(WORD LIMIT)I prepared another folder today, all files had been re-written. I spent nearly whole day to re-do the experiments because all data were lost with the folder. I finished all before getting off work finally. I went to the meeting room to have a cup of coffee to relax. Oh my God! My lost folder lies on the table. I thought about it, I had a short meeting with one client in this meetng room yesterday and I put my folder on the table. I forgot to bring it back after I said goodbye to my client! Now I have two folders for one case. Overall Teacher Comments Dear student, Thank you for your very interesting submission, it was a pleasure to read.You need to work on word limit,capitalisation,and spelling.Instead of writing I lost my one of my folders you can write it as I lost one of my folders.A definite article such as the is used to refer to a specific instance of the noun, often already mentioned in the context or easy to identify. Use an before words beginning with vowels or when a consonant initial has a vowel sound.All proper nouns like the names of people, places, profession, nationality, days, months, etc, need to be capitalized.The pronoun I always needs to be capitalized.Word limits are prescribed not to make it difficult for the stude