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概括内容要点 Teaching aims: 结合广东省模拟试题的读写任务的具体分析，本节课讨论读写任务写作中的概括短文的内容要点的做法。 Procedures: 1.Introduction: Rating criteria:概括部分（即文章的第一段）占5分，要求“按要求概括了全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。” 好的开头是成功的一半。文章的第一段甚至第一个句子往往影响了评卷老师的主观印象。若想应试作文拿高分，第一段在很大程度上奠定了这篇文章的档次。 2. How to write summary (1) Examine the topic 题目要求概括全文的内容要点最为常见:”请用30个词概括短文的要点”；但也有更具体的。如，2007年广东卷读写任务，要求概括父母对“我”的希望；佛山二模，要求概括作者喜欢与朋友共处的原因等等。因此，审清楚题目要求是非常重要的。 A: 注意关键词（题眼）并使用适当的英文词汇表达。 Passage 1 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Dear Ari, As you sleep in my arms, I’m amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you. I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That’s why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means 搇ion?It l’s our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others. Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you’d be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon. Finally your mother’s labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord(脐带) and put you in your mother’s arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face. And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion’s heart. Welcome to the world, Ari. Love, Daddy ［写作内容］ 假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)： 1.以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望； 2.以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点： (1)读信后的感受； (2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。 Dear Daddy, Tonight is your 50th birthday, and I haven’t really got the chance to say all of my thanks I want to tell you. 如上述20