夹叙夹议文写作指导.doc

夹叙夹议文写作摘要的开头语 a.点明写作目的类： 1.The passage/ story is mainly about (talks about) … 2.The writer/author tells us about … 3.The passage narrates that … 4.The writer tells us…（主题）by showing us an example of…, who/which…（故事情节）. b.作者经历类： In the passage, the writer mainly tells us his experience of doing sth, which…… c. 他人经历类： This passage is mainly about sb’s experience of doing sth….. 记叙文的过渡语 (引出类似的经历) 1.This story reminds me of another story that happened to… 2.This story reminds me of a similar experience of… 3. There is a story about me realizing the importance of patience. 4.Take me for example. 5.As far as I am concerned, I have a similar experience . 第三段： 1.Through this experience, I have learned that we should help each other in our daily life. 2.As for me/ Personally, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem, only in this way can we build a harmonious society in the future. 结尾段： 1.To be brief，we should be aware of the importance of...总之，我们应当明白……的重要性。 2.Therefore，it is necessary for us to...因此，我们有必要 3. In a word/ All in all/ In conclusion/ To sum up… 夹叙夹议就是一方面叙述某一事情，一方面又对此事加以分析与评论。这种表达方式中的叙与议是一个有机的整体，“叙”是“议”的基础，即议论不能脱离记叙，必须在记叙的基础上展开；“议”是“叙”的渗透，即议论在记叙的基础上发表，且要有一定的深度与广度。 写夹叙夹议类书面表达时，思维要有灵活性，要随着记叙与议论的转换，及时调整思维方式。夹叙夹议的写作 文章内容要素包括who, what, when, where, how。夹叙夹议文写作的具体过程是：点题(abstract), 指向(orientation), 进展 (action)，评议(evaluation), 结果(result)和回应(coda)。 ”读写任务”写作的第一部分即summary只占总分权重的20%,即5分。而第二部分即opinion部分则占80%，即20分。因此，若想在这一大题中取得好的成绩，opinion部分是关键。那么，如何才能发表出中肯的“观点”，在众多考卷中脱颖而出，获得阅卷老师的青睐呢？下面就以一篇实例具体分析其解题思路及整体上如何备考。 It is an in-depth relationship combining trust, support, communication, loyalty, understanding, sympathy and intimacy(亲密,亲近). These are certainly aspects of life that all of us desire. Being able to trust and relax with your friend is a big part of friendship. Remember when you were young you went with a friend to her grandma’s for the weekend. It was fun but when you got home, home was wonderful. Your feeling was “I’m home. I can relax now.” Th