[中学联盟]江苏省江阴市成化高级中学高三复习课件：写作3.pptVIP

 Version ?????Several days ago we held a discussion on whether it is good to keep animals in zoos. Those who favor the idea think it provides chances for people to see wild animals. It might also develop people’s love for animals and nature. Besides, animals in zoos can be protected from danger in the wild. ??? However, those who are against the idea think it is a waste of money and labor to keep animals in the zoos. What’s worse, it damages the balance of nature. Animals will lose their freedom if caged in the zoo. ?? As far as I am concerned, it is wrong to take animals away from their natural living areas . Animals have the rights to enjoy their life in the wild. * 全国高考书面表达的评分标准： 覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,具备较强的语言应用能力；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。 第五档（很好）（21－25分）： 增强书面表达效果的技巧 全国高考书面表达的评分标准： 较好完成试题规定的任务；应用基本准确；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尝试使用较复杂结构或词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（好）（16－20分）： 增强书面表达效果的技巧 ……….. 分析失败的原因,改进学习的方法,增强自信心 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力 你的态度及理由 积极态度 消极态度 作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，遭遇过失败。请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。 One sample : Failure is the Mother of Success. We middle school students have had many tests and exams. We have experienced success and failure. There are some students take a negative attitude towards failure. Some people have low spirit and lose their heart. They will not go on working hard any more. So they may be fail in the next exams. On the contrary, the positive attitude is that they may analyze the reason of failure and improve the way of learning. It increases your confidence. As far as I concerned, everyone may make mistakes. As long as we study hard, we will success. We must know failure is the mother of success. 2 who ∧ Some students take a negative attitude towards failure 1 3 taking are in s other students with positive attitudes for They encourage themselves to be self-confident. ∧ am succeed As we all know, 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使