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* 如何提高书面表达句子的档次 浦江中学 洪英 Welcome to our school 你的英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文： 一、通常方式 1．生日聚会 2．生日礼物 3．生日祝福 二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由 *词数100-120 （2005 浙江卷） Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy… 学生作品（1） Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is becoming more and more popular, as a result of its convenience. However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future; for another, you’ll be happy. As a result, I think it better to help others to spend one’s birthday. 学生作品（2） Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is becoming m