医学编辑与写作paragraphstructure.ppt

Paragraph Structure October 14, 2010 Three Aspects Paragraph development Continuity Emphasis Paragraph Development Analyze of the organization of the following paragraph. (A) There are three different theories put forward for the very slow relaxation of catch muscles of molluscs. (B) The first theory holds that catch is due to some unusual property of myosin in these muscles that produces a slow rate of detachment. (C) In this theory, paramyosin would have no special role beyond that of providing the long scaffolding on which the myosin is positioned as well as the mechanical strength for the large tensions developed. (D) The second theory holds that tension is developed by actin-myosin interaction but is maintained by paramyosin interactions. (E) Because the thick filaments are of limited length, interaction would have to occur through fusion of thick filaments. (F) The third theory, to which I subscribe, pictures a structural change in the paramyosin core affecting the rate of breaking of myosin-actin links at the filament surface. Analysis A: the topic sentence B: the first theory C: Explanation to B D: the second theory E: Explanation to C F: the third theory Further Analysis The author mentions the two theories that he disagrees, then he puts forward the theory he subscribes. Thus, what does the author want to discuss in the next paragraph? Paragraph Development 先概要，后细节 Topic sentence first, then supporting sentence. Create a expectation, and then fulfill the expectation. Patterns of the organization Least to most importance Most to least importance Announced order Chronological order Problem-solution Funnel Pro-con Continuity: I Seven skills: 1. Repeating key terms exactly and early 2. link the key terms 3. use transitions 4. keep a consistent order Continuity: II 5. keep a consistent point of view 6. use parallel form for parallel ideas 7. signal subtopics within a paragraph Repeating Key Terms Exactly and Early One more exerc