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留学文书高端案例分析 富有个性的自我陈述一定是找准了申请者的亮点，并进行深度聚焦。这些亮点出现的地方可以是：人生经历中独特的插曲、非同寻常的天赋、自我奋斗过程中克服超常的困难、杰出的品格、对所申请专业深入细致的了解、对适合自己研究方向的真实认识、优异的学习成绩、出众的工作经历等。 　　自我陈述的最大忌讳是毫无特色、枯燥乏味。因此，我们要在看似平淡的简历中挖掘出不平常的亮点，这一两个亮点会让你的整篇PS光彩夺目！ 案例一： 四川美术学院的A.Li同学 从小喜爱绘画 曾获得“多喜爱”杯全国青少年儿童绘画大赛二等奖，“希望”杯全国青少年绘画大赛三等奖，长沙市四中绘画比赛第一名。 业余帮一些杂志报纸绘文章插图赚取稿费 申请攻读英国某高校美术专业硕士 　　参加各种绘画比赛获奖的记录及给报纸杂志撰画说明了她在本行业上的丰硕成果，但这些记录是枯燥单调的，无法使她爱绘画也擅长于绘画这个形象鲜活灵动起来，于是编辑为她设计了下面一段文字： Wind, and the problems of capturing it on canvas, fascinated me. When studying at Sichuan Fine Arts Institute, I showed the lengths I would go to for the sake of an artistic challenge. I decided to paint the sheer silk curtain with ripples by the wind from one lower side. Since there was no obliging breeze, two roommates were asked to use a fan to various positions and create ripples with the artificial wind. A campus photographer was asked to record the effect as an aide-memoire, was heard muttering, “This girl is completely mad.” 风，以及把风捕捉在画布上的问题，曾使我痴迷。当我在四川美术学院学习的时候，我会为了这些问题尽心竭力。我决定去画那块光滑而轻薄的丝绸窗帘因一侧微风而泛起一丝的摺皱。由于没有方便的微风，因此我请求两位室友在不同的位置用扇子扇出人造风来，使窗帘呈现出细微摺纹。我还请求校园里的摄影师把这个效应照下来作为参考佐证。有人听见那摄影师自言自语地说：“这个女孩真是疯了。” 　　编辑了解到这位申请者在个人生活上经历了一些挫折，如父母在她初中毕业时离异，最关爱她的奶奶在当年初离开人世。于是编辑聪明地将这些挫折与她的绘画有机地结合起来，将她一生与绘画已经结下的缘分和将来会有的相依相靠的关系推上了一个新的高度。编辑在她的个人陈述中写道： When I wandered forlornly in the various stages of my life, the Muse of Painting always came to my rescue. My parents got divorced after I graduated from Junior High. At the beginning of this year, my most loved grandma passed away. I found solace in painting when these adversities struck me. Despite the demands of my academic studies, no opportunity for painting was missed. My paraphernalia – easel, canvases, brushes (freshly cleaned), paint box, and stool – accompanied me even on the busiest and most chaotic days. If it weren’t for painting, I couldn’t live happily. I couldn’t bear the strain of things. Painting is a great companion with whom I am to walk for my entire life. 当我在人生的各阶段孤零愁苦地徘徊时，司绘画之缪斯女神解救了我。父母在我初中毕业后离异了，今年年