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美国本科申请成功案例： P同学被美国加州地区顶尖院校——加州大学洛杉矶分校录取 高中生去美国读本科 [学生背景] ??? 学生姓名：P同学??? 学历背景：大同中学??? 语言成绩：平均分85分;SAT I 2150，TOEFL 106??? 录取情况：加州大学洛杉矶分校、加州大学圣地亚哥分校 [案例解析] ??? 成绩优异 热衷体育??? 对学习充满求知欲的P同学在老师眼中一直是个认真又聪明的学生。除了优异的学习成绩之外，学生还热衷于体育运动，尤其是跳高，并且多次获得上海市青少年跳高比赛的名次。 ??? 然而，P同学刚到AA留学的时候，却是一个完全没有准备出国考试的学生。当时，离加州大学申请截止只有不到半年时间，P同学既要参加标准化考试，还要准备学校申请的一系列文书，压力之大可想而知。而在与P同学充分沟通后，我们也意识到这样一个优秀的学生，如果是因为出国准备晚而不能进入美国顶尖的大学，将会是一个很大的遗憾。 ??? 明确留学方向 着手留学申请??? 通过交流，我们决定兵分两路。??? P同学一边准备标准化考试，我们也着手开始准备他的申请材料。到11月份的时候，P同学已经取得了托福106分，SATI2150分的好成绩，这也为他自己的美国名校申请增加了重要的砝码。在和P同学深入的沟通过程中，我们逐渐发现这个学生身上更多的闪光点：不仅仅是学习成绩优异；跳高方面在上海市青少年比赛中多次取得很好的名次、丰富的志愿者服务经历、对生物、物理等学科的强烈兴趣和钻研精神，这些都让我们对P同学有了更加全面的认识，并将他的这些优势在申请文书中进行了充分的展示。 　　 ??? 终于，P同学在收获的季节拿到加州大学洛杉矶分校等数所美国名校的录取，我们祝愿他在今后的学习中再创辉煌。 ? 加州大学洛杉矶分校 附：UCLA Essay II??? Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are? ??? The most important experience to me is practicing high-jump since grade 4. I learnt so much from high-jumping, such as how to get along with others, make friends, and gain confidence. Back to grade 4 I was just a shy kid who went on training reluctantly. But after making some friends in the team and conquering my first height, I found the sport interesting and was willing to attend training. I kept training and in one day’s afternoon, to my surprise, my coach asked me to attend a formal match. After I heard the information, I was so motivated that I told myself to try my best and devote more time to practice. Time went by so fast and finally the match day came. ??? It was a May morning in 2010 when the Shanghai Youth Track and Field Tournament took place. The moment I left home for the tournament, I thought I was very well prepared. I held my head erect and back straight, and wore a confident smile, being sure that I could win a good prize in the high jump competition. For me it