必修五Unit3Writing高分写作指导.ppt

Unit 3 写作技法指导 Writing 五步写作规范 写作范式必备 想象性 一 一般将来时 Some people will go to the moon for their holidays. Some scientists will live under the sea. We will have videophones in every home. We can have a medical examination or do some shopping without leaving our homes. There will be more educational programs on the radio or TV. Children will study at home instead of going to school every day. The robot will do the shopping and the housework for us. Some people will go to the moon for their holidays, and some scientists will live under the sea. We’ll have more videophones in our home by which we can have a medical exam or do some shopping without leaving our homes. Sometimes I dream about life in the future.What will it be like？Perhaps some people will go to the moon for their holidays, and some scientists will live under the sea.Maybe we will have videophones in every home by which we can have a medical examination or do some shopping without leaving our homes. I’m sure there’ll be more educational programs on the radio or TV.Children will study at home instead of going to school every day. No people like doing housework.Maybe in the future each family will have a robot.Every day we can ask the robot to do the shopping, the housework and so on.I believe the dream will come true some day. 想象性作文 本单元的写作项目属于新课标中说明文或记叙文中的“想象性”作文。这类题目要求学生在头脑中创造出从未接触过的甚至根本不存在的新的形象。想象性写作允许自由想象、自主发挥的空间较大，因此需要灵活的思维能力和丰富的想象能力。要写好此类文章，应注意以下几点： 1．首先要确定写作主题。确定主题，明确写作中心，是写好文章的前提，想象性写作也不例外。因为想象虽然可以海阔天空，但总要围绕一个中心进行，这个中心就是主题。 2．想象美好，立意深刻。想象性作文必须要有一个“美好”的中心思想。如果只是瞎编一个热闹离奇的故事，就失去了想象的意义。 3．构思要巧妙，想象要合理。构思和想象是写好此类文章的关键，既要合乎逻辑，又要匠心独运，或启迪思维，或引人入胜。 [题目要求] 根据以下内容，通过合理的想象，以“Our Future Life”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，展望一下未来的科技生活。 1．有些人可以到月球上度假。 2．有些科学家能在海底生活。 3．每家都有可视电话(videophone)，通过可视电话人们可以进行体检和购物。 4．孩子们可以在家通过电视和广播接受教育。 5．机器人为你做家务。 第三步：依提纲、准翻译 要点一：有些人可以到月球上度假。 要点二：有些科学家可以在海底生活。 要点三：每家都有可视电话。 要点四：我们可以通过可视电话进行体检和购物。 要点五：广播或电视上会有更多的教育节目。 要点六：孩子可以在家学习而不是天天去上学。 要点七：机器人可以为我们购物或做家务。 第四步：句升级、求靓丽 句式升级一：用and