大学英语写作模板,3,4级通用分析报告.ppt

英语写作 外语学院 卢培 东西方思维模式差异 中国人的思维模式 中国画 意合 书法，草书 外人还真看不懂！ 东西方思维模式差异 亚里士多德 古希腊演说 现代西方思维模式 直截了当，环环相扣，步步为营 西方思维模式 西方人写作模式 第一句话话概述主题思想 引出具体事例，发展思路 主题句（Topic Sentence) 发展句 （developer） 结尾句 (Terminator) Version1: We live in a world in which science and technology is developing very quickly. The development of science needs scientists from all over the world to exchange their work more and more frequently. However, scientists from different countries speak different languages. So they can’t communicate with each other freely. Scientists also write journals in different languages. So if they don’t understand English, they can not understand what others had written, since most journals are in English. So, English is very important to scientists. Version2: English is important to scientists. To begin with, English is the vehicle of information. It’s widely used in the world, and most journals are written in English. So scientists need to use English to get information. What’s more, English is the working language of many meetings in the world, especially science meetings. All in all, scientists should learn English well. 阅卷老师的盲点，兴奋点以及残留点 1.阅卷老师的弱点： 厌倦 Bored 疲劳 Tired 气愤 Fretful 长时间的阅卷，气愤的老师脑子中就有了一个框架 每篇文章都被套进这个框架中审阅 抓住弱点！ 作文 箭 一箭命中要害 阅卷人的兴奋点 1.行文结构 2. 论据以及细节 3. 一两个高级词汇或者修辞运用（亮点） 阅卷老师的盲区 1. 选择了什么论点 2. 少量标点或拼写错误 3.论据是否天衣无缝 阅卷老师的残留点 阅卷老师在身心俱疲的情况下，快速浏览了作文，绝对是边看边忘。但是如果有亮点，少数还是会进入老师的潜意识，老师在很大程度上就是根据亮点打分 兴奋点越多，残留点越多 5个常用单词的替代 Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / suppose Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positive Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negative Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con 开头方法： Nowadays， the issue on……is highly debatable， and ideas vary from person to person（不要用different people ） Some would claim ……，while some others may suggest…… Some would claim……，while the idea……is st