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中考英语作文范例：我们的住宅小区 Our Housing Estate 我们的小区 There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our housing estate Rainbow Estate, is one of them. 浦东新区有很多漂亮的小区，我们的小区——彩虹小区，是其中之一。 You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2. In the gardon there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1. A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. 小区中间有三条街道。在第二条街道前面是一个美丽的花园，花园里有个喷泉。在第一条街道的右面是一个商店，而第三街道的左边是一个巨大的运动场，可以看到男男女女在那边做运动。 There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate. 在我们的小区有一个小小的幼儿园。对于我们来说，住在小区十分方便和舒服。 点评：文章的结构与布局较合理，有一定的顺序，层次分明。 中考英语作文范例：我们的语音室 编辑点评：中考英语作文的另一种类型是说明文。说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。 说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的，可以自上而下，自左而右，从里到外，从整体到局部等等。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。 常用的句型如： There be... I have got a/ an... It is red/ green/ colour/ round... I like... best. It looks like... I like it very much. I will keep it forever. Our Language Lab 我们的语音室 There is a language lab in our school. Its on the third floor. Its big and clean. 我们学校有一个语音室，它位于三楼，大而整洁。 There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk in it. There are 50 headphones on the desk. 语音室里有50张桌椅，50台电脑和一个操纵台，桌子上还放着50副耳机。 Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy. 我们每周都会在这儿上英语课，我们在这里看幻灯片，电视，视频和听磁带。然后老师会向我们提问。我们很喜欢这个语音室，并且总是保持它的干净整洁。 点评：这篇文章写了我们的语音室,按照一定的空间顺序，先写设备，再写功能，让人对语音室的概貌有一个全面，准确的了解。 中考英语作文范例：温泉让我得到休息 编辑点评：中考英语作文叙事文章要拿高分，除了要说清楚整件事情的来龙去脉，更关键的是要说得生动有趣，让评卷人获得情感上的共鸣。我们仔细观察下今天的作文范例是如何做到这一点的吧。 Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest 温泉让我得到休息 We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, Wow, it is hot! I didnt know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid t