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学习目标：。 自学指导：。 【体裁导航】写议论文要注意三个问题： 1．议论文要有论点、论据和论证三个环节(即三个要素)，并在论证的过程中，让阅卷老师充分感受到你的英语水平。 2．议论文的时态比较灵活，应根据具体内容使用正确的时态。 3．英语的议论文受篇幅限制，短文开头就应提出论点。 杂议短评类的议论文，就是指通过语言或文字，对某一现象进行议论，或对所读的材料进行评析，并通过议论，从而提出自己独到见解的分析文章。也就是我们平常所说的“小论文”。 杂议和短评本身并无实质性的区别，只是其范畴有时可能存在一定的差异而已。例如，某年的上海高考英语题，就曾要求对孩子被溺爱的现象进行杂议或短评。近几年北京的开放作文，也多属杂议或短评类的一种书面表达形式。 【写作示例】 健康是福。但是随着人们生活水平的提高，生活节奏的加快，越来越多的人喜欢吃形形色色的简单快捷的包装食品；交通工具的改进也使得人们越来越缺少必需的体力运动。所以出现了很多的“亚健康(sub-health)”人群。请你以“How to Be Healthy？”为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，就此事发表一下你的看法。 【写作要领】 一、审题要点：1．体裁：议论文； 2．时态：一般现在时；3．人称：第一人称。 二、内容要点：1．描述出目前存在的问题：食物方面：吃快餐；运动方面：缺乏体力运动； 2．这些问题造成的后果：亚健康(描述一些症状)；3．提出自己的建议：多吃健康的食品，多运动等。 【模板】一、开头 参考句式： 1．Nowadays, because of the fast pace of life, more and more people like eating fast food. 2．Today, people are busy with their work, so they always eat some fast food. 3．In order to save time, many people like eating fast food. 4．Because of the fast pace of life, people have to eat more fast food and have no time to take exercise. 二、主体 参考句式： 1．How can we keep fit? 2．What is the good way to keep fit? 3．We must pay attention to our health.4．First we should ...and then we should ... 5．The most important thing is ...6．It is good for us to... 为使各项内容衔接自然，可以适当添加过渡词语。如：firstly, secondly, thirdly ...on one hand ...on the other hand ... when, while, as ... but, however ...because, so, as a result ... 三、结尾 参考句式： 1．In a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit. 2．In short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise. 3．As is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be. 可用来表示总结的短语：in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。 【范文点评】How to Be Healthy? ①Today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food.Besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking.②Because of these，more and more people are confronted with the threat of sub-health, for example, some can’t sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on. ③But how