高一英语写作训练论述.ppt

作文基础过渡性训练;连贯与句式的运用;连贯(coherence) 指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。 ;;;7、 其它 不得不做某事 have to do sth./have no choicebut to do sth. /have nothing to do but do sth. 有必要做某事 There is no need (for sb.) to do sth. /It is necessary (for sb.)to do … 最好做某事 You’d better do sth. It’s better to do sth. 做某事没困难 have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth. 感谢某人 thank sb. / be thankful to sb./ express one’s thanks to sb. / be grateful to sb. / Thanks to …;求助某人 turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help of / with one’s help 惊奇 To one’s surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外结果） 原因如下（很多）The reasons are as follows. There are many reasons for it. 浪费金钱（时间）It’s a waste of money / time … 结果 As a result / Therefore / Thus / So 总结 In a word / In short / Above all / After all 表达观点 In my opinion / I think / I believe / I’m sure / I guess ;Task 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。;句式的运用：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。;句式的运用：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。;Task 2 按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。 1.Tom saved the drowning girl.(强调) 2.I hope I can pay a visit to you next year.（强调） 3.Tom was puzzled.（感叹） 4.It is great fun to climb the hill.（感叹） 5.Tom and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒装） 6.John likes to study and play.（否定倒装） 7.Soon the firefighters came.（表时间句型）;; Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and can’t afford their education. They have to stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughters needn’t go to school. They don’t let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldn’t like to go to school. All the children including girls should be educated . The whole society