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【总体评论】问题：　　1、选词不够精确，如Arctic, mining profits, self sufficient, alarm等的翻译对等词。　　2、漏译严重，如rare earth metals未译metals、one of southern Greenland’s major towns未译one of、forming the basis of a potentially lucrative mining industry未译potentially lucrative等等，不一而足。　　3、同位语结构处理不当，英语结构照搬现象严重，如Narsaq’s largest employer, a shrimp factory以及said Hans Kaspersen, 63, a fisherman. “Lots of people have lost their livelihoods。优点：四字格、成语使用较好，给译文增色不少。　　As icebergs in the Kayak Harbor pop and hiss while melting away, this remote Arctic town and its culture are also disappearing in a changing climate.　　随着卡亚卡港的冰山在消融过程中劈啪嘶嘶作响，这座遥远的北极小镇及其文化也随着气候变化渐渐消失。　　Narsaq’s largest employer, a shrimp factory, closed a few years ago after the crustaceans fled north to cooler water. Where once there were eight commercial fishing vessels, there is now one.　　纳萨克最大的用人单位是一家捕虾厂（同位语翻译法），几年前倒闭了，原因（after此处最好译为原因）是虾蟹都逃往了北方更寒冷的水域。这里曾一度有八艘商业渔船，现在只剩一艘了。（不是“一家”） 　　As a result, the population here, one of southern Greenland’s major towns, has been halved to 1,500 in just a decade. Suicides are up. 　　结果，这座南格林重镇之一的人口在短短10年中下降了一半，只剩下1500人。自杀率不断攀升。 　　“Fishing is the heart of this town,” said Hans Kaspersen, 63, a fisherman. “Lots of people have lost their livelihoods.” 　　汉斯 卡斯培森，（英语结构，未汉化，扣分严重）一位63岁的老渔民说：“捕鱼一直是这个镇的支柱产业，现在大批的人失去了生计。　　今年63岁的渔民汉斯·卡斯佩森说：“捕鱼是这个小镇的核心，现在大批的人失去了生计。” 　　But even as warming temperatures are upending traditional Greenlandic life, they are also offering up intriguing new opportunities for this state of 57,000 — perhaps nowhere more so than here in Narsaq. 　　不过，尽管不断变暖的气（候）正在颠覆格林岛传统的生活方式，但也为这个57000人口的国家提供了新的契机, 而只有那萨克才有这样得天独厚的条件（机遇）。　　Vast new deposits of minerals and gems are being discovered as Greenland’s massive ice cap recedes, forming the basis of a potentially lucrative mining industry.　　随着格陵兰岛广袤的冰盖逐渐消退，露出了大量的矿藏和宝石，为当地发展（潜在利润巨大的采矿业）奠定了基础。 　　One of the world’s largest deposits of rare earth metals — essential for manufacturing cellphones, wind turbines and electric cars — sits just outside Na