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BEC 写作语言及组织 评分标准： 1 content 2 language 3 structure vocabulary 4 organisation 展开论述上面的4个方面 1 内容的完整性 2 语言 6C原则 1．准确(correctness) 包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确措词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确。 (1)恰当的语言风格 请比较下面两组例词： Formal Informal approximately inquire ascertain obtain assist participate construct purchase contribute sufficient difficult utilize About Ask find out receive help share build buy give enough hard use (2)准确的措词和信息 (3)正确的语法和标点符号 2．清楚(Clarity) (1)逻辑布局(Logical Organization) 常用的逻辑布局方法包括： ①因果关系(Cause Effect) ②时间顺序(Chronological Development) ③序列顺序(Sequential Development) ④比较(Comparison) ⑤一般到特殊(From General to Specific) ⑥特殊到一般(From Specific to General) (2)合理构架句群与段落(Well-Written Sentences Paragraphs) 例句： 修改前: Marshall Corporation was founded forty years ago, and it now has branch offices in four states, and it employs nearly 400 individuals. 修改后: Marshall Corporation was founded forty years ago. With branch offices in four states, it now employs nearly 400 individuals.(3)统一性与一致性(Unity and Coherence) (4)强调(Emphasis) ①位置 ②重复 ③数量 ④技巧 (5) 将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。 比较下面三对句子： A. They bought a bicycle in Beijing in a small shop which costs $ 25.00. They bought a bicycle for $25.00 in a small shop in Beijing. B. He was warned not to drink water even in a restaurant which had not been boiled. He was warned not to drink water which had not been boiled. C. Those who work rapidly get ill in these conditions. Those who work in these conditions rapidly get ill. (6) 避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个。 We shall take a firm line with the firm． We shall take a strong line with the film． 3．简洁(Conciseness) A. We have begun to export our machine to countries abroad. We have begun to export our machines. B. In the event that you speak to Mr. Wood in regard to production, ask him to give consideration to the delivery schedule. If you speak to Mr. W