高考英语书面表达指导与训练2培训课件.pptVIP

English Writing 高三英语 武俊杰 指导教师 张铁华老师 The Guidance and Practice of English Writing 英语书面表达指导与训练 学习目标 通过本节课的学习, 使学生了解英语写作高分技巧即：文章增“亮”三重奏和掌握英语写作的方法即：书面表达六步曲 学习重点 学习难点 怎样创作出一篇高分作文 文章增亮三重奏 书面表达六步曲 解读新课标高考书面表达评分标准 第五档（best） （21-25分） 第四档（better ) （16-20分） 第三档（good） （11-15分） 第二档 (bad) （6-10分） 第一档 (worse)（1—5分） 0分 空白或内容与写作任务无关或无法辨认。 ? 注意：书写规范的重要性—干净入法眼， 工整是敲门砖！ Step Ⅰ Which level does your English writing lie in? Which level do you prefer? 解读新课标高考书面表达评分标准 第五档 (best) (21—25 分） 1.准确、清楚地表达短文的内容，要点无遗漏； 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。 Step Ⅱ How to write a charming English composition? 文章增亮三重奏 高级词汇 句型多样 衔接顺畅 1.Please compare the following two sentences and tell which one is better. ①The math problem is difficult for us to work out. ② The math problem is a great challenge for us to work it out. Technique 1: Advanced words（高级词汇） 2.Please translate the following sentence into English by using various forms. 我们很吃惊，他没有来上学。（一句多译） ①We were very surprised that he was absent from school. ②Much to our surprise, he was absent from school. ③It was surprising to us that he was absent from school. ④He was absent from school, which surprised us most. ⑤What surprised us most was that he was absent from school. Technique 2: Various sentence patterns (句型多样） 3.※【课堂体验】用适当的连接词填空 ①He is a great scientist. ___________________________, he is good at playing the violin. ②The young man didn’t enjoy his previous job. ________________,（相反地） he finds the new job very interesting. ③English is a useful language.___________,(一 方面)it is an official language in the UN. _________________,(另一方面） it is widely used in business, science and technology. What’s more/ Besides/ In addition On the contrary For one thing For another (thing) Technique 3: Proper linking