chapter6减词,重复概览.pptVIP

Translation Techniques(2)Ellipsis/Omission Good Version Appreciation The shopman offers you a third apple, before biting it, you examine it, and find that it is hard and green, and you immediately say you will not have it, as it must be sour. 1. 概述 英汉两种语言在许多方面存在的差异往往使译文（target language）与原文（source language）有很大的不同。原文中没有的，为了行文的需要，要增加一些词，而有时行文中有的，译文中如果出现，则显得多余，加上不算错，省略了则行文更简练。省略法的目的主要在于使行文简练不罗唆。 2. 英译汉省词情况 （1）从语法角度： a. 减代词 b. 减冠词 c. 减介词 d. 减连词 e. 减动词 f. 减非人称代词“it” They went in to dinner. It was excellent, and the wine was good. Its influence presently had its effect on them. They talked not only without acrimony, but even with friendliness. II. Omission of pronoun 1. 在英语中，代词充当主语的情况相当多。为了使译文前后的句子意思紧凑，避免重复用词，汉语习惯采用无主句，其主语就是前面的代词。 He was thin and haggard and he looked miserable. 他消瘦而憔悴，看上去痛苦不堪的样子（一副可怜相） 2.英语中的泛指人称代词作主语时，常常可以省略，翻译成无主句。 One can never be too careful in one’s work. 工作越仔细越好。 Fight when you can win; move away when you cannot win. 打得赢就打，打不赢就走。 We have 7 days a week and 24 hours a day. 一周有七天，一天有24小时。 one could never get real rest without a peaceful mind.如果心情不平静，是休息不好的。 3. 作宾语的代词,翻译时也可以省略. Please take off the old picture and throw it away. 请把那张旧画摘下来扔掉。 Gathering facts, confirming them, suggesting theories, testing them, and organizing findings– this is all work of science. 收集事实并加以论证，提出理论并加以检验，以及归纳整理研究成果——这全都是科学工作的内容。 4. 物主代词在英语中出现的频率非常高，翻译时完全可以省略他们。 He took off his coat and shoes. Then he put on his slippers，went to the sofa and began to watch TV. After a moment, he asked his wife to bring him a cup of tea. 他脱了大衣和鞋子，然后穿上拖鞋，走到沙发前，开始看电视。过了一会儿，他叫妻子给他端杯茶来。 Halliday put his pipe down, crossed his hands behind his neck, and turned his face towards the window. 哈利德放下烟斗，两手交叉放在脖子后面，转过头去看窗户。 5. “It” 作代词时，也常常可以省略。 Outside it was pitch dark and it was raining cats and dogs. 外面漆黑一团，下着瓢泼大雨。 Be a place what it may, one gets to like it, if one lives long in it. 无论怎样的地方，要是住得久了，总会渐渐喜欢起那地方的。 “It” 用于强调句中，没有实际意义，也要省略。 It is only shallow people who judge by appearanc