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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。 ?????? 2．只允许修改1 0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Passage1 From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted. 【小题1】students后加who\that或去are．??【小题2】which改为it? ?【小题3】work改为working??【小题4】have后加?a??【小题5】under改为in? ?【小题6】poorlypoor??【小题7】moved改为?moving? ?【小题8】eye-exercise改为eye-exercise??【小题9】ButAnd? 【小题10】Only后加if /when 【小题1】学生是先行词，在定语从句中做主语，不能省略，用who\that。也可以去掉are?改成非谓语动词，表示主动关系。因此students后加who\that或去are。 【小题2】众所周知是定语从句，后面应该用主句，关系代词which改为普通代词it，it is +形容词+ to do句型。因此which改为it。 【小题3】保持眼部工作很长时间，keep+宾语+宾补，宾补可以用形容词或非谓语动词，眼睛和工作是主动关系，因此work改为working?。 【小题4】固定短语“休息一下”have a rest?，因此have后加?a。 【小题5】“在太阳下”应该用介词in?，in the sun，因此under改为in?。 【小题6】也不要在光线差的地方，形容词修饰名词，因此-poorlypoor。 【小题7】移动中的车辆，表示主动，正在；而moved表示被动，完成，因此moved改为?moving?。 【小题8】做眼部练习，多次练习，应该用名词复数形式，因此eye-exercise改为eye-exercises。 【小题9】最后一条建议与上文中的三条建议是并列关系，因此ButAnd。 【小题10】Only后加if /when?从句+部分倒装构成倒装句结构，因此Only后加if /when。 Passage2 I felt?sadly?yesterday when our teacher told us something about Project Hope in class. It?has?set up to help the children in the countryside who can’t?pay?to go to school. After school I came home. I was wondering if I could do something for the Project?then?I caught sight of?money-collecting box?on the table. Then I made up m