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三段十句作文法 银川一中 魏凤玲 英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（200字以下）的句子数量都在8至12句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均10~15个单词计算，用8~12个句子便能完成一篇要求在120~150词的作文。其基本模式为： 第一段（开头） 主题句+扩展句 第二段（正文） 主题句+扩展句+扩展句+扩展句+扩展句（根据内容确定扩展句的多少） 第三段（结尾）——结尾句 第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。 第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。 第三段为结尾，简化为一句，使对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。 三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。 范例： 高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题适当展开，词数100~120。 Health and Sports Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports. However, I should utter a sonorous voice that sports are essential to us. As an old saying goes, 揂ll work and no play make Jack a dull boy.?Concentrating on study for all day long without any relaxation is not effective and do harm to our health. Taking some exercises after class can relive the pressure of taking examinations. Of course, it is improper for students to overdo sports. As a whole, we should make a balance between sports and study 专家点评： 本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“Health and Sports”这一主题展开，两种观点陈述清楚。文中运用大量的词组和短语，语句变化多样，过渡自然，结尾表明自己的观点，也显得落落大方 ★ 英语写作常用句型模板 （一）段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天， 它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……； 其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.