2015北京市中考作文评分标准及优秀.docVIP

北京市中考作文评分标准 ........................... 1 第一档：（15—13分） 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。 第二档：（12—9分） 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：（8—5分） 部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。 第四档：（4—0分） 与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示内容，所写内容难以理解。 important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film… 参考范文： English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well. 　　English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a lot to improve my English. Firstly, its very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that I can go over my lessons later. Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it. 　　I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English party or English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English. 二 假设你叫张明，，请你给他写一封回信。在信中回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。Dear Li Ming， I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What should I do? Yours, Tom 参考范文： Dear Tom， I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right. She wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you. It’s good for your study. I think you had bette