如何让你的作文瞬间变得“高大上”.ppt

如何让你作文瞬间变得“高大上”? 1.要点可适当整合，用一个句子表达。 1)姓名：钱学森 出生年月：1911年 出生地：上海 被誉为“中国航天之父” 2)纽约中央公园位于曼哈顿的中央。面积为340万平方米。 3)Many students spend a lot of time playing computer games. It’s a waste of time and energy. 7)After they settled in the city , they began to hunt for jobs. _____________________, they began to hunt for jobs. 6.巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句等，增强语意。 1)He knew little that five years later he would be playing alongside his childhod hero. 2)People will begin to understand something about copyright protection only when people have to pay. 3)The way they play together makes Manchester United popular.(强调主语) 4)On May 12, 2008 a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan.（强调时间） It is __________________a terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan. 5)This creature taught me a beautiful lesson.(感叹句型) 7.运用对称、排比句式，使句子节奏感强，富有音韵美。 * How to polish our sentences? QianXuesen,____________ “father of China’s space program”, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. Central park, ________ the centre of Manhattan, covers an area of 3.4 million square metres. regarded as located in Many students spend a lot of time playing computer games ,_______________________________. which is a waste of time and energy _____________, they participate in programs that help society. setting out to Yunnan To stand out 2)They want to stand out ,so they participate in programs that help society. Before ___________________, we were very excited . 2.运用非谓语动词，使句子更简洁，更有文采。 1）Before we set out to Yunnan, we were very excited. 3) The film is set in the ancient China. It is worth seeing.4) When you face difficulty , you should never give up. The film ____________________ is worth seeing. set in the ancient China When facing difficulty __________________ , you should never give up. ____________________, they were frightened. When trapped in the lift They don’t know what ___________. to do next. 5)They were frightened, when they were trapped in the lift. 6)They don’t know what they shall do next.