高三英语看图作文讲评课件 人教版.ppt

Warming upRevision of proverbs 1. 双鸟在林不如手握其一。（到手为财。） 2. 事实胜于雄辩。 3. 经验是好的，只要代价不太高。 4. 英雄所见略同。 5. 母爱永恒。 主要特点 看图作文解题过程 一、看图审题:认真读题然后找出基本要素:5W1H: 何时, 何地 ,何人, 为何, 如何, 做了何事 明白主题和寓意，剖析产生现象的社会原因，需自己表达观点否 二、抓要点:确定主要行为（详略得当，突出主题），配动词，注意时态、语态及搭配的副词、介词等 三、扩展成句:形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词 句子结构应多元化 表达应地道自然 四、连句成文:词与词搭配 注意多使用高级词汇 句与句相连时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应 适当联想和发挥 分段写作 段落清晰 首尾句要有闪光点（如谚语等） 五、查错改错:主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？要尽量剔除错误 六、誊写:卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！ 金陵中学2006届高三第三次模拟考试英语试题 书面表达（满分25分） 下面4幅图描述的是Tom和Mike的一次经历，请你根据图画内容和文字提示写一篇120字左右的短文。 注意适当发表个人观点。 At present, playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people, especially with school students. Take Tom and Mike for example. Every day One possible version At present, playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people, especially with school students. Take Tom and Mike for example. Every day after school, they go to the computer bar to play games till late at night ,and they often have a competition to see who wins more scores. Once ,Tom didn’t go home until eleven o’clock at night. When he got home, he told his mother that he had been going over his lessons. Poor mom！She believed him and cooked two eggs for him. “Take more care of yourself as you work too hard, my dear son.” But Tom’s face turned red at his mother’s praise. Later he made up his mind to work really hard. In my opinion, … Thank You! Wish you every success! 下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。（2006年辽宁） 注意：①短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，短文的内容要连贯、完整；②短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。 请用“中秋节的等待”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评论。（2006年江西）　　要求：1.文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；2.词语为100左右。 1. I heard the news. I cried. 2. The economy develops quickly. People’s life has improved a lot. 3. I live in a room. The windows of it face south. 4.I didn’t go back until she telephoned me.（倒装句） 5.I met your father in the theatre.（强调句） 6. The scenery of the mountain is beautiful. 7. The book is important to us. * 高三英语写作专题之 江苏省高淳高级中学