定语从句在写作中的应用（杨婷）.pptxVIP

Welcome to our class!High School of Henan University Yang Kun How to Use the Attributive Clause in your Writing 写作中的定语从句 Part1.高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：1.（2013年全国高考新课标I）你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。You know, my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting._______我让叔叔带去你想要的那幅中国画。I’ve asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before. ____________2.（2013年广东高考）那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。________________Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society. 正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。_______As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work. 3.（2013年福建高考）没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。_______________A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor. 当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children, which makes the children rely on their parents badly. _________________________Part2.写作中定语从句的主要作用：This is my uncle, a doctor.This is my uncle, who is a doctor. 1.增加词数2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一Last Saturday I watched a concert.The concert was wonderful.Last Saturday I watched a concert which was wonderful.3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes, which are the special food for this festival. 1.两个句子的合并S1：Harry Porter is a boy.S2：He has a scar on his forehead.S1+S2Harry Porter is a boy who has a scar on his forehead.Guangzhou is a beautiful city.It develops very fastGuangzhou is a beautiful city which develops very fastJphn，my best friend，gave me a gift，which he bought from USA2.三个句子的合并（适当运用同位语）3.四个句子的合并（同位语词组）Kate，a new student from a northen province，speaks a dialect which we find it hard to understand.Wangmeng，a girl of 25 who was born in Hei Longjiang Provice，began her skating training at the age of 10.Iphone，苹果公司制做，深受年轻人的欢迎。Iphone，a kind of cellpone which is made by Apple，is quite popular among teenagers.二.作为插入语使用众所周知综上所述As we all knowAs is mentioned above插入语位置灵活，可放在句子前中后的位置。1.众所周知，中国拥有最多的人口Chi