8年级上册3单元作文学生范文讲评.pptVIP

好作文要求： 卷面美，要点齐， 文字优，无错误 加分： 1.分段（2-4段，最好3段） 2.适当的发挥； 3.过渡词过渡句； 4. 言简意赅，不啰嗦； 5.一两句书上的好句或谚语; 6. 用同义词，不用重复的词 My best friend is Mary. Because she likes to do the same things as I do. We have something in common. Were both 14 years old and my hair is as long as Marys. We both like singing, too. However, we have something different. Mary is taller. She is more helpful and quieter than me, but Im more outgoing and funnier. Besides, I like playing sports. Thats why its very easy for me to make friends. About study, I think Mary is more hard-working. And she sa