小中高英语写作-北外培训.ppt

Beautiful.?? Clear.??? Wonderful.?? Good hand-writing. Glad to see your improvement in handwriting. You’d better pay more attention to word order. Be more careful of your spelling. Its important to compose a draft beforehand. I enjoy reading your writing. You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences. Im expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on. If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me. 基本句型 Sentence 1 拓展句型 Sentence 2 拓展句型 Sentence 3 How is water wasted at home? Each person uses about 80-100 gallons of water per day. Does it surprise that most of the water we use goes down the toilet? We also use a lot of water to wash clothes and take showers. That is what we should pay special attention to at present. There are many things you can do to save water at home. 收集素材 Solution 1 Solution 2 Solution 3 Flushing toilet Using washing machine Taking shower 收集素材 __________ the computer _______a new document ______on “save” ________your homework ______a document How do you write your homework on the computer? open click print write First,… Second,… Next,… Then,… Finally,… 语言准备 We must/ can/ had better… I suggest that… Why not… I think it would be a good idea to … My suggestion is that sb. should… 语言准备 Water Topic 1 Topic 2 Topic 3 Example 1 Example 2 Example 1 Example 2 Example 1 Example 2 写提纲 1.水对我们非 常重要 2.家庭用水被浪费的现象严重 3.节约用水的措施。 Headline Main idea Important details (Five “W”s) The Content News story 写提纲 【问题八】英语课堂写中阶段可以设计什么活动？ 写中阶段While-writing 任务与目的： 模仿写作,写草稿。一般由学生个人完成或者对子小组共同 完成。 写中阶段While-writing 活动设计： （1）规划文章结构； （2）写初稿； （3）填空； （4）看图作文； （5）提示作文; （6）把图转换成文字; （7）仿写； （8）连句成文; （9）口头作文； （10）听写。 __ is my favorite teacher. Reasons? Details? Para 1 —— brief introduction Para 2 Para 3 —— 规划文章结构 Your feelings 具体细节 A story beginning body ending who when where what how Time order Time order Framework of a story Basic tense: The simple past tense 规划文章结构 Structure Who you are writing to Reasons f