高三英语写作guidance课件.ppt

Students sleep less than 7 hours. Because they are burdened with lots of homework. Students sleep less than 7 hours, because they are burdened with lots of homework. Follow the tips when writing: 1. Think before you leap. You should write what you are required to. (审题） 2. Use advanced vocabulary and complex sentence structures you are familiar with . 3. Try to avoid the mistakes mentioned above. * * 一．优秀（26—29） 要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达充分，能有效使 用连接成分，具备较强的书面表达能力。语言 小错，不超过四个，不能有一处大错。 二．良好（22---25） 要点全面紧扣主题，观点表达较充分，语言有 少量错误（大错不超过三个），但基本不影 响意思表达。 三．一般（18—21） 要点全面，紧扣主题。语言表达基本充分，语 言错误影响部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本 正确。 小错：单词拼写, 冠词, 大小写，标点符号错误。 大错: 句法结构错误；内容 要点或次要点遗漏; 搭配错误; 词语用错（介词，名词，动词, 副词，形容词，主谓一致，非谓语动词); 汉语式英语. 只要出现了一个大错，就与优秀档即26-29分彻底无缘了。 一、 Sentences without subjects 二 、Only clauses are presented 80% of the students think should be given less homework. 80% of the students think they should be given less homework. 1. Most students burdened with too much homework. Most students are burdened with too much homework. 2. Paying too much attention to students’ grades will of great harm to their health. Paying too much attention to students’ grades will be of great harm to their health. 3. Some students against the idea. Some students are against the idea. 三、Sentences without verbs Students should be not given too much homework. Students should not be given too much homework. 四 、Verbs with the wrong objects We can’t eat too much sugar and fat. We can’t eat too much food with much sugar and fat. We can’t eat too much food rich in sugar and fat. We can’t eat too much food which is rich in sugar and fat. We can’t eat too much food containing lots of sugar and fat. We should avoid eating too much food which contains much sugar and fat. 五 、“Not” in the wrong position Some of the money collected should be paid to the gardeners for their work, and