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My work experience Hangzhou Renhe Foreign Languange School Zhejiang Anji Yuxiang Foreign Language College Hangzhou Normal University Zhejiang Shinyway Language School (Zhejiang Shinyway Overseas Study and Service Centre) Rationale for the Presentation 今年的高考作文 现在大学中的CET-4/CET-6 A-LEVEL Level 6 Students show further motivation to study English and a growing awareness of autonomous learning. They can: l???? Understand the viewpoints expressed in oral or written materials and state their own view l???? Effectively use oral or written language to describe personal experience l???? Plan, organize and carry out a variety of English learning activities with the teacher’s assistance l???? Take the initiative to exploit a range of learning resources and gain information through multiple channels l???? Adjust their own learning objectives and strategies according to the results of self-assessment l???? Understand the cultural background to and connotations of language during communication 作文的评分规则 文章的结构 内容的相关性 观点的展开 语句与词汇的多变 语法的正确性 文章的结构 题目：在你的家人中．你最喜欢谁? 我最喜欢我妈妈。我最喜欢我爸爸。我最喜欢我姥姥。我最喜欢我姥爷。我最喜欢我爷爷…… ． 我最喜欢我妈妈。她从不打我，也从不骂我.每当我犯错误的时候，她总是耐心地给我讲道理，让我分清什么是好什么是坏。例如，有一天，我打了邻居家的小丫,她没有先责怪我，而是给我讲了小朋友之间应该怎样关心，怎样友爱。此外,她还特别关心我。每当我生病的时候，她总是整夜不睡，一直陪在我的床前看我静静入睡，还时不时摸我的额头，看是否还在发烧。而且，她还特别爱帮助别人.每当邻居家有困难时，她总是想办法帮助她们。邻居的李大妈是孤寡老人，妈妈经常过去和她聊天，陪她解闷。还时不时给她送去一些好吃的。 语句/词汇的多变性和合适性 根据中文顺序或思维方式死译 语句: 经过三年的努力工作,我们将身体很累. After 3 years’ hard work, I want to have a relax body. (feel relaxed) 词汇: 文化 胸有成竹 老三老四 半瓶醋出事故 Error Analysis Richard Wu Lexical Errors Form Errors Meaning Errors Part of Speech Errors Form Errors Sometime I need to join the (an) international conference…(Sometimes外形相似) Our university has some different characters. (characteristics 构词接近） The former has shorter history than the later. (latter 书写相近） Both of the two university are essential to the education course of our country. (cause发音相似） They all have made a great effect to (for) their lives. (effort 拼写相象） Because I am