高中英语必修一-1Unit_1_Friendship.pptVIP

【素材示例】 假如你是李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，请就“成绩好的学生与成绩差的学生同位”这一话题发表你的观点与看法。 注意： 1．词数：120～150，短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2．参考词汇： 成绩差的学生： a slower student Dear Mr Zhang， We have had a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. 审题构思： 篇章结构： 内容要点： 拟关键词： 构建句式： 【佳作播报】 Dear Mr Zhang， We have had a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. Some are for the idea①. As they know，everyone has advantages as well as disadvantages.Although some are not good at lessons，they might do well in other fields like sports or arts.Therefore，they can learn from each o ther.And they may develop a friendship.In addition②，top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons，which benefits them all. However，others dont hold the same view.They think some slower students are always making troubles，such as keeping talking in class，breaking school rules，which may lead them to form the bad habits.Besides，slower students often ask top students questions，which has a bad effect on the tops studies. In my opinion，Id like to choose to share a desk with a slower student so that③ we can learn from each other and make progress together. Yours， Li Ping, 【赏文酌句】 结构的合理安排是本文的一个亮点，本文是明显的“三段式”结构——正方的看法、反方的意见和自己的观点；在叙述双方观点时，内容完整，对比明显；在表明自己的观点时，态度明确且有理有据。 【佳句模拟】 1．be for支持，赞同 [模拟]　Are you for my plan? 你支持我的计划吗？ 2．in addition另外，此外(＝as well，相当于连接副词) [模拟]　I dont like fishing，in addition，its raining heavily. 我不喜欢钓鱼，此外，天还在下着大雨。 3．so that表示目的，“为了”，与in order that相同，是写作中常用的句型。 [模拟]　Im going to leave early so that I dont get stuck in traffic. 为了不被困在交通堵塞中，我打算早离开。 佳句背诵   He is crazy about English.Nothing delights him so much as reading English stories.