2015届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达15.docVIP

2015届高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达15 浙江省温州市十校联合体2014届高三上学期期末考试英语试题 【题文】请根据上面图画所反应的现象和问题，写一篇100—120个词的短文。你的短文应该包括： 1、 描述这幅图。 2、 说明反映的问题。 3、 阐述你对这个问题的看法。 注意：短文的开头已经给出。（不计入总词数） As we can see in the picture，________________________________________________ As we can see in the picture, Xiaoming is busy with his homework while his mother is fanning him to make him cool and comfortable. The picture implies the parents are indulgent with their children. For example, like the picture, they do everything for their children to create a good opportunity for their children to involve in their study, which most children are willing to accept. I don’t approve of what the parents do. Surely there comes a time when everyone has to leave the parental nest, look after themselves and pay their own way in life. Therefore, the parents are required to be aware that a great love and concern means providing a good chance for their children to fly higher instead of spoiling or restricting them. Certainly it’s better to take action now. 【解析】 【考点】表明自己的观点—漫画作文 【写作指导】1.本次写作任务是漫画作文，实际上是半开放写作。因为学生有很大的发挥空间。漫画作文常规上以三个层面或段落来完成：叙述图画；分析图画；提出建议。时态宜用一般现在时，有些地方要用适当的情态动词，should，ought to，must，can等。 As is shown in the picture……. The picture tells us now…. The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with,…. And this social problem should arouse the great concern of all in the world. In my opinion/As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First,…Only in this way can we solve the problem of… 【一句多译】 1. 介绍画面内容时可使用: As we can see from the picture, According to the picture/From the picture,we can see.... The picture shows that... Picture 1/The first picture shows/tells us that... Picture 2/The second picture shows/tells us that.... 2. 介绍画面内容的现实意义时可使用: This kind of phenomenon is very common in life/society. We can often see this kind of phenomenon in life/society. This kind of matter often happens in our life/society. 3. 对社会现象进行评论时可使用: We shoul