2009年12月英语四级真题精讲-作文.docVIP

2009年12月英语四级真题精讲：写作 Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes) 　　注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。 　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of 　　Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 　　1. 建设绿色校园很重要 　　2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境...... 　　3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该...... 　　Creating a Green Campus 　　审题谋篇 　　本次四级作文主题为绿色校园，这是一个看似简单普通的话题，写起来却不是那么容易。因为很多考生对于绿色校园所表达的内涵感觉比较生僻。假如对绿色校园这一主题感到难以把握，考生可以从作文提纲入手进行分析以获取对绿色校园这一概念的相关信息。 　　根据作文提示2，可以看出此处的绿色校园指的决不仅仅是青青的草地和高大的树木构成的校园绿色风景，也不仅仅指对校园环境的珍视和爱护，而是指一种环境保护的文化氛围和师生具有的环境素养，以及由此带来的和谐的人文环境和社会绩效。在深入理解概念的基础上，考生还应对 绿色校园的重要性进行剖析，这时，考生可以从多个角度组织素材，比如从校园的环境问题出发，进而扩展到师生的环境意识对绿色校园所产生的长远意义以及为未来环境改善所做的贡献。最后是阐述建设绿色校园所要采取的措施。 　　需要注意的就是作文给分的重点在于考生如何用恰当的语言词汇表达自己的思想观点。而不是写得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三个自然段，大概十句话，基本的分布为首段、末段合起来五句或六句，中间段五句或四句，做到结构清楚，重点突出，就可以了。 　　参考范文 　　Creating a Green Campus 　　Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining a green earth being the focus of the society, green campus has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society. 　　The concept of green campus does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in peoples mind. Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of green campus will definitely produce a profound effect on students various environmental protection activities after their graduation. Whats more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve. 　　To make green campus come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls for peoples awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste. Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that g