非谓语动词使英语书面表达多样化概要.ppt

第六档（很好）（第一篇13～15分，第二篇22~25分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 1.覆盖所有内容要点。 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3.具有较强的书面表达能力，使用较复杂结构或较高级句子，基本无语法或词汇错误。 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分、全文结构紧凑、篇章布局合理。 方法一.使用非谓语动词,代词或从句使句子简洁高档 方法二. 巧 用倒装结构增强句子的表现力. 方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式，如：复合句，强调句或with 的结构等。 方法一. 2.使用代词或从句使句子简洁高档 他为他的失败找了许多借口，但是没有一个有说服力。 1.Wordy: He gave many excuses for the failure, but the excuses he gave were not convincing. 2.Concise: He gave many excuses for the failure, but none of them was convincing. 3.Or another more advanced sentence: He gave many excuses for the failure, none of which was convincing. 1.Poor as the environment is , they all study hard. 方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式 我哥哥骑车载着我。 1.My elder brother was riding and I sat on the seat behind .(并列简单句) 2. My elder brother was riding with______________________. 从句和with 结构的互换 1.As spring comes on ,trees turn green . 2.With _______________, trees turn green. 他于昨天下午五点到达这里。 1.He came here at 5:00 p.m. yesterday. (一般句式) 2.He did not come here until 5:00p.m. yesterday. (否定句) 3.Not until/till 5:00 p.m. did he come here yesterday.(倒装句) 4.It was at/ not until 5:00 p.m. that he came here yesterday.(强调句) 5.It was 5:00 p.m. when he came here yesterday. (定语从句) 他成功地通过了，这使我们感到很惊讶。 1.He succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam , which surprised us greatly. (非限定性定语从句) 2. The fact that he succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam surprised us greatly. (同位语从句) 3. We felt greatly surprised (that )he succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam. (宾语从句) 他成功地通过了，这使我们感到很惊讶。 4.What surprised us greatly was that he succeeded/was successful (in) passing the exam. (主语从句表语从句) 5.It was surprising that he succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam. (主语从句) 1.Lian Zhan and his wife/The Lians were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment/as soon as /when they arrived at the airport. 2.On arriving/On their arrival at the airport , Lian Zhan and his wife were warmly welcomed. 3.No sooner had Lian Zhan and his wife ar