写作指导.ppt

Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? / Attention please, everyone. ……… That’s all. Thank you! 口头通知 书面通知 Notice …… Student’s Union 3. 词法错误1) 用词重复 如：return back; repeat again; Chinese students in China have our own way to celebrate birthday. 2) 用词不当 如：把bring写成“take”，“get”，“fetch”等 把欢迎某人到我校写成welcome you to visit our school 正确的说法是：You are welcome to visit our school.或Welcome to our school. 3)词性混淆 A.不及物动词当成及物动词： 例如：is happened / is belonged to/ come (to) the city/ return (to) the place B.把形容词用作动词如： 例如：This will happy the foreign visitors. Please ready a small gift. C.不可数名词用作可数名词： 例如: make a great progress What a fine weather day! D.形容词和副词的使用错误 例如：work hardly talk friendly Don’t take it serious. 4）虚词错误 A.冠词的漏用和误用 例如：Send him a email. B.介词使用错误 例如：They had to wait the bus under the hot sun. 5）拼写错误 把礼物present写成peasant –parents, pleasant, 如把present写成parents那行文就成了please bring along your small parents for this purpose. Remember to wrap it up. sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. 4. 句法错误 1）连词错误 如：because 与 so; although/though 与 but同时使用。或两个句子之间没有连词，如：He likes English, I like maths. 2) 中式英语 如：“晚会将在主楼花园顶上举行。”写成” The party will in the main building roof garden held.” “操场上有五个学生在踢足球。”写成 “On the playground there are five students play football.” 把There will be a party写成There will have a party. 3）句子前后不一致 学生常常容易在文章中的时态、语态、人称、主谓一致出现错误。 如：The place can solve the problem. The book was disappeared last week. Mr Smith, with his wife, have arrived in Shanghai. I will go to visit you as soon as I will return to China. You should work hard. If not, we will fail to pass the exam. Describe the following pictures 1.他是一个八岁的男孩。 A. He is a boy and he is eight years old．　 B. He is a boy ,who is eight C. He is a boy of eight． 1 2.那女子笑着说“此事很奇怪”。 A. “It is very strange” the woman said and smiled． C. “It is very strange”said the