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5. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用介词）. 6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 7.I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 8. My father sat in the sofa. He was smoking and reading a newspaper. (with结构) 9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.(越…) 10.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.(同位语从句) * 报纸上有人想寻找一位网友，你有意， 给她写一封信，告诉她，你的情况 ， 你的家庭 ，学校生活。 Dear friend, I’m writing the letter in response to your advertisement .I am a girl of the same age with you ,and I come from a happy and warm family, which includes my father,my mother and I . I study in a key school from my hometown, but I have never regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collecting and I have collected a lot of stamps. I also like swimming. I wish I can get in touch with you and hope to be friends with you . Yours truly, Li Hua Dear friend , I can’t wait to write to you. Having known that you are looking for a pen-friend, I am very eager to be friends with you. I just graduated from a middle school. I am 18 years old. There are four people in my family. My mother is a worker. My father is a doctor. My sister is a student. My school is beautiful. I also want to look for a pen-friend. I am interested in stamp -collecting. I am waiting for your answer . Best wishes ! Yours truly, Li Hua 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 　 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章？ 1 一、避免句式单一 Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. If I