高中英语北师大版选修6练习：Unit 16　Stories 写作园地 Word版含解析.docVIP

写作园地 对应学生用书P32写人记事记叙文 [感悟范文] 请以“My First Class in the New School”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 注意：内容只需涉及一个方面； 词数为100左右。 [范文] I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, ②when I found ③it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. The teacher spoke English throughout the class, ④which ⑤was totally different from the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me ⑥while I was reading the text as aloud as other students. After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. The smile shone on the whole day and the following days. A week later, I volunteered to ⑦take charge of English study in my class. ⑧Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class, I began to be confident. Since then ⑨not only can I follow the teacher, but also I have been improving my English gradually. [技法讨论] 本单元的写作题材是写人记事，要求写出一件事或有关人物。 一、写人记事属于记叙文范畴，包括人物介绍、讲述故事、撰写游记、新闻报道、校园轶事等。 二、写人时，要交代清楚人物的身份和事迹，大体分为三段。第一段写出生年月和地点以及家庭背景。第二段要详细描述人物的成绩，例如，何时何地荣获何种奖项。第三段要写人物的优秀品质对他人的影响。 三、写事时，要交代清楚事件发生的时间和地点，重点描述事件中感人的场面。 黄金表达 1．记事 One night about nine oclock, Dr. George received a call from Dr. Jim... ②It was after six oclock in the morning when he... ③This morning I went to a shop to... ④On March 23, at 10：30, a terrible accident happened on... Last Spring Festival, my parents and I went... ⑥School was over. Wang Lin asked Wang Gang to go home together. ⑦On my way to the park, I saw a group of young men... 2. 记人 Mrs. Smith, aged 55, has worked for our school for 2 years... ②Wu Ping, who is a famous young writer, was born in... ③I have a little niece, who is called... ④Liu Haiyang, a student from Chinese top university, badly hunts for... ⑤Once there was a man who wanted to buy himself a pair of shoes. ⑥Sun Shuwei is a boy of 14 from Guangdong... ⑦Our English teacher, Ms. Yang, came to our school in 1998. 亮点分析： 亮点一：本文第一部分讲述了我作为一个新生在第一天的第一节英语课上遇到的困难；第二部分讲述了老师的微笑帮我解决了困难；第三部分感谢