写作2第三次作业指导.doc

写作2第三次作业指导 请看以下样例（严禁抄袭该样例） Sample 1: Writing (2) Assignment 03 - Analyses Course: Writing (2) Unit: 3 Assignment code: 03 Assignment title: Learning experience Student: Li Zhihua Study center: Beijing TC Class: 2001(Autumn)- DP Notice: You can use the following model assignment for reference, but you are forbidden to copy it in whole or in part, otherwise you will get ZERO for this assignment. All assignments should be written in your own words.您可以参考此次作业的教师评判，但是严禁任何形式的抄袭。一经发现，此次作业将被判为零分。 ? ? Learning experience ? Yan fang (capitalize) is a lawyer. In my hometown, many people admire (her) for her talent. From grade school tohigh school, we are(Comment: were ) classmates. No one knows (that) behind her today`s (present/current) success has (there is, or she has had) an unordinary (extraordinary) experience. Six years ago, she graduated from high school (new sentence) for three years when she wasn`t married (before she married). Relies her farther`s (A careless spelling error; see below) relationship (Relying on her fathers connections) she worked in an office of the local government of the twon. (This must be town: a careless error. The first few times I read it I had idea what it meant) She has not concrete things to do, (had no specific duties) just some cockamamie sundries.(trivial chores) She wasn`t satisfied with the situation, so she decided to change it. She sign (use past tense) up the legal course (for a law course) at a provice`s (the noun is spelled province and the adjective, which you must use here, is provincial) college. From then on, she busied (worked) in daytime and studied in the evening. In addition, every weekend she must (had to; past tense of must) go to the city to attend the course. By bus, it took about three hours to arrive (reach) the city. But three years (during a three-year period), she has (D=delete) never delayed (What does this mean?) a course. She got the (a) college diploma (Pe