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有的放矢？ 1. 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 2. 评分时注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 3. 拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 4. 如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 Correct the following sentences 1.At last ,we should be calm , waiting the rescue teammates to help us . 2.Don’t take a elevator or jump from high building. 3.You must use a wet towel to cover you nose and mouth. 4.There are some accidents happen everyday. 5.You should keep clam . 6.It is wrong that to take a lift. 7.When you are caught in fire . 8.You had better to call 119 at once. 9.When facing with the fire ,you should keep calm. 10.This action enable us to get out of the fires easily. 7.The key to escaping from the fires is to keep calm.（慧君） 8.It is your safety that is the most important. （淑萍） 9.We should make every effort to get away from the fire quickly, for our life is more important than anything else.（莹婷） 10.Jumping from the high building is not a good idea .So dangerous is it that it will make you die.（美娟） 11.Whats the most important is that we should call 119 immediately. Only in this way can we deal with the fire as soon as possible.（倪丽丽） 书面表达 为了普及“急救知识”，你所在的班级最近举办了一次急救知识大讨论。现请你根据以下要点以“First Aid in Fires” 为题写一篇文章，说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项，放在学校网站的英文专区里。 1.室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出； 2.不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下； 3.你自己还有什么好的建议。 注意： 1.词数100—120； 2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Paragraph 1 了解火灾中急救知识的重要性 1.书写 好 一般 有待于提高 2.审题 时态 人称 分段 3.要点 齐 漏（指出具体哪一点） 4.病句 几处 5.闪光点 几处 6.文章流畅性 好 一般 差 7. 总分 * 写作基本功 一·书写要规范，字体大方、饱满 二. 句子要有准确性 三. 语言要有闪光点 四.文章要有流畅性 /\ for an your which calm / / faced enables , 1.We should do whatever we can to make ourselves safe . （钱倩） 2.It is unwise to take an elevator or jump from the high build.（俏璐） 3. There is no doubt that you must make every effort to tell others you are in danger.（巧琴） 4.Dangerous as you are ,you must keep calm. （叶晨） 5.Here are some points that may help