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（第二段）先总后分的原则： 5分的思维：The number of areas damaged in the Africa was about 1200 million hectares; the figure of damaged area in Asia was 1150 million hectares while that was 400 million hectares in Australia and that was 350 million hectares in Europe. 6分的思维： The land clearing in the Africa and Asia was highly pervasive, almost damaging 1200 million hectares or so whereas that in the Australia and Europe was less serious, about 400 million hectares of land degradation. 7分的思维： The areas of land damage in Africa and Asia are similar, totaling approximately 1,200 million hectares for each, while in Australia and Europe the numbers are considerably lower, averaging between 300 and 400 million. 新浪微博：@李威廉IELTS 重要句型组合—表示上升下降的句型 A increased by 70 percent while B decreased by 30 percent in the year 1990. 然后重复该句型。谓语动词过于单调。 A increased by 70 percent. The year 1990 saw // witnessed a 70-percent rise in A. A experienced a 70-percent growth in A and underwent a 30-percent decline in A. A was on a 70-percent rise in the year 1990. 新浪微博：@李威廉IELTS （第四段）写特殊的那段 7分的思维： Asia shows a slightly different picture, where tree-cutting activities have led to the largest amount of land loss (450 million hectares). Breeding and farming account for the remaining damage, (380 and 420 million hectares respectively). 新浪微博：@李威廉IELTS 新浪微博：@李威廉IELTS  线图中的6分,7分,8的准确限定 In spite of the strong fluctuations in the previous ten years of beef consumption, averaging at 200 grams per person per week, its trend followed a rather even trend of decline, hitting a trough at only 100 grams per person per week. 2014年 4月12日作文真题以及8范文 大作文：some people say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful adults for society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Do you agree or disagree? 首段体现批判性思维 高分的节奏 我的观点是教育的短期目标是实现学生技能和思维能力的提升，从而实现个人梦想；而终极是必然是为了服务于社会，甚至人本身存在的意义就是在于服务社会。教育只是一种手段，而人更多的是通过实现个人目标而对社会有意。 首段体现细化思维和批判性思维 My personal answer to the purpose of education is