中考英语冲刺之写作(中考书面表达体裁及套路).doc

中考写作要求辅导讲义 主 题 套路教学内容 《英语课程标准（2011年版）》规定：初中毕业时（五级），学生应能根据图示和表格写出简单的段落或操作说明，使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系、能简单描述人物或事件。 作文评价基本要求 Elements（要素） Level（档次） Content（内容）（6分） Relevance to topic（切合题意，体现要点） 6 5.5 5 4 3 2 1 0.5 0 Development of topic（题材有所发挥） Accuracy（准确性）（6分） Grammar（语法） 6 5.5 5 4 3 2 1 0 Vocabulary（词汇） Mechanics（机械性，指大小写和拼写等格式错误） Fluency（流畅性）（3分） Organization（结构） 3 2.5 2 1.5 1 0.5 0 Cohesion（连贯性） “Things I Hate to Do”． （以“我不喜欢……”为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文。） Use the following points as a guide. （短文必须包含下列要点。） - What are the things that you hate to do? - What do you hate most? Why? (Give at least two reasons.) I love people and enjoy life. However, there are still things that I hate to do… 第一篇 I hate to drink wine and waste time. But I hate smoking most！ Smoking is not harmful to our health but also harmful to other peoples health. There are many people die of smoking every year. If we stop smoking, our health will become better and better. So we must do our best to stop smoking. Then our world will become more and beautiful. 点评： 该文章基本切题，除了第四句有语法错误以外，全文意义比较连贯，表达也比较清楚。但是，文章句式比较单一，用词不够丰富，缺少变化，理由只举了一个，没有展开。 第二篇 I hate to keep pets and tell lies. And the thing that I hate most is smoking. As we all know, smoking is unhealthy and can cause diseases. It is not only bad for smokers but also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes,I feel sick and start coughing. Besides, smoking wastes a lot of money. Most people never plan to spend a lot of money on cigarettes, but once youre addicted to it,stopping is very difficult. So if you smoke, youre actually setting fire to piles of money. Just think of what you could buy with that money at the mall! Whats more, people who smoke smell bad. The unpleasant smell stays on hair, clothing and skin.Then there is the bad breath. Therefore,I hate smoking most. 点评： 该文章紧扣主题，意思表达清晰；文章层次分明、理由充分( harmful to smokers and others，waste a lot of money，smell bad)、结构完整；用词规范、准确，富有变化；上下文衔接合理、意义