杨娜老师2011写作联讲.pptVIP

What can money buy us? Can it bring happiness all of us live to seek for? Obviously, different people may come up with different answers to the question. Some may take it for granted that money is the sourse of happiness; but others argue that money can buy you nothing but all evils. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 2011写作串讲 杭州泰祺 杨娜 zjuyna@163.com Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 小作文 1. 考试安排及本次考试分数分布 2. 评分标准 3. 写作结构(补充其他小作文模板及句型) Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 1. 考试安排及本次考试分数分布 小作文：满分10分（写作时间10分钟左右） 本次考试评卷松，大部分学生6分 ？？？灭绝师太级评分？？？ 最高？？最低？？ Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 评卷老师的标准： Step1：挂档！！ 一档——9分 二档——7分 三档——5分 四档——3分 五档——1分 老师最喜欢的档位？？？？？ 空档！！！?（无字作文——0分） Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. STEP2：打方向！ 根据档位调节方向盘控制走向。 容易受影响因素： ——字数及字迹 ——拼写及标点符号 ——语法 ——逻辑及内容 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. STEP3：赛车？！ 横向比较，同一批作文中前后学生作文参照（评分人员2分的调节分权利） 结果：六月飞雪，比窦娥还冤? Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 3分档作文： Dear Mr.Li: I have just bought a new cell-phone in Zhejiang Hangzhou. This my new cell-phone from your company made. I have used three days that find there are some problems with the cell-phone. Above all, the new cell-phone skin have too many little point. Second, the new cell-phone massage systems. And imge systems is can not to see. I have to letter to you, because my have your helps. Please letter me hurry up. Thank you very much.