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2013中考作文：假如你是三(1)的李华，今年即将中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢; (2)消除与同学之间的误会; (3)努力学习，实现; (4)对学弟、学妹的建议。 注意： (1)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯; (2)词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。 High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior 3 student, it wont take lon g before I graduate. 【猜题理由】本篇书面表达能比较真实地反映学生的生活实际，话题内容关注学生的社交生活和树立健康的人生观，具有考查的现实意义和指导意义;在语言表达上，能够让学生充分运用所学知识，毫无词汇障碍地表达自己的思想;此外，在语言表达的设置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激发学生个 性观点的创建。 【构思点拨】本篇书面表达是常见 的提纲类型的写作，要点明确清楚，便于学生组织文章，理清脉络。行文时要注意处理好语言表达的控制性和伸展性之间的关系。 【参考范文】 High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, I graduate very soon. Now, I have many things to share with you. Firstly, I would like to show my thanks to those people who help and care about me, especially my teachers, parents and friends Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make an effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, no pains, no gains. Finally I hope that all the younger students can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men. Li Hua 我的中国梦My Chinese Dream When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without thinking twice: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible care accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future. 当有人问我:你的中国梦是什么？我会毫不犹豫的回答：当一个好医生。我当医生的原因就是为了救助更多的人。当我年纪还小时，我遇到了很严重的车祸。多亏了医生，把我从死亡线上救了回来。从那时起，要当一个好医生的梦想就一直激励着我。我一定要努力学习，在不久的将来实现自己的梦想。 Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make ourdream come true. 中国梦由每个普通人的梦想组成。我们应该尽自己