读写任务概括中易错点分析与点评.pptVIP

Summary writing  * * * 典型错误1. 提高文章的理解能力，准确把握原文要点，并把其写进概括中。 The writer was lack of confidence when he was young. So his mother encouraged him to participate in an English speech contest ? ,which changed his life and make him understand the importance of confidence. 概括要点不齐全 注意人称，记叙文中要用第三人称转述。 I was lack of confidence before. So my mother encouraged me to take part in an English speech contest, which changed my life and make me realize the importance of confidence. 没有正确使用概括中的人称 典型错误2. 要用简练的语言概括 The passage indicates that fresh water is becoming less and less because of the increasing number of people and the industries．Some scientists are trying to keep water from being polluted.People also dig deep wells, collect rainwater or distill sea water to get more fresh water. （47 words) ? 使用太多细节内容而不是 用概括的语言 典型错误3. 那怎样精“兵”裁“员”，使语言简练呢？ Skill One: 用单词代替短语? I didn’t go to the party owing to the fact that I was very busy. I didn’t go to the party I was very busy. because Skill Two: 用短语代替句子? 1.During the past four years when he studied at college, he seldom watched TV. During the past four years he seldom watched TV. 2.When you are crossing the road, you must be careful. When the road, you must be careful. at college crossing The passage indicates that fresh water is becoming less and less because of the increasing number of people and the industries．Some scientists are trying to keep water from being polluted. People also dig deep wells, collect rainwater or distill sea water to get more fresh water. ? Let’s correct it! People of some nations have taken action to save and get more fresh water. population 要避免引用原文的词句，用自己的语言概括。 Fresh water is becoming scarce, but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people and the industries. We must find new ways of saving it or producing it, and some nations have worked on the problem. (38 words) 过多引用原文词句 典型错误4. 那怎样换“汤”不换“药”， 用自己的语言概括呢？ Sk