英语强化训练—作文—实践篇.pptVIP

Welcome Back!; 英语强化训练－作文-实践篇;习作欣赏与分析;; 此题是英文题目、中文提纲，属于议论文体，要求考生就世界变得越来越小进行阐述最后得出结论。以下为五篇不同档次的作文，如果你为阅卷人，请你已与上面给出的四级考试作文评分原则及评分标准，为这五篇作文打分。请写出你的印象奖励分（具体得分）及你的得分依据。实际得分依据及实际得分在五篇样卷后。;Sample 1; There are better and better between people and people. A country people have relation in the ther country.Between country and country.There have a better relate.So following the world development The traffic will became better and better more and more country have shipness. So there have a famous word: The world is getting smaller and smaller. ; The earth on today is the earth on yesterday. Why do we say that the world is getting smaller and smaller? The first reson. The car and train. Plane make it easily that we go to anywhere in the world. We can be able to get to New York by air from ShangHai In several hours. A handred years ago, the trip would cost two months. We can arrival in Beijing by train from Shang Hai in one day. A few handred years ago, the trip would cost us several months.; The second reason. We are working and studing with many people. We connect with more people, because we need more help than before our grand pearens need, and grandgrand farther and mother need. The world is seen smaller and smaller. Because we can be able to anywhere easily, we connect with a great number people. Several handred years ago , human being can’t do this, so they see the world so big.; You will say “Hello ! The small world!” the moment you run into one of your friends in another city one day. It just express your surprise. But now, the world is getting smaller and smaller. A good case in point is the development of modern transports. We can visit some of the countries on the other side of the world several hours later provided that we take a plane. But in the old years, only a dozen miles can we travel. So to go abroad is like to drop in some of my neighbours now. The world is smal