2012中考英语写作书面表达.pptVIP

中考英语书面表达;第一部分;一、考试说明：;二、评分标准;二、评分标准;二、评分标准;二、评分标准;二、评分标准;三、写作流程;三、写作流程;三、写作流程;三、写作流程;三、写作流程;三、写作流程;四、注意事项;第二部分;;2009年北京市中考试题;优秀范文; With some housework to do, every family member is assigned some tasks to finish every day. For me, instead of a bothersome matter, doing housework for my family is actually what adds some spice to my life. 在第一段中，作者简明扼要地点明写作主题;… After getting up every morning, I constantly help my mum prepare for breakfast, from which I obtain some valuable skills in cooking. Also, thanks to the housework, I have some good opportunities to spend time talking and laughing with my mum, so that I can refresh my mind in fast-paced life and get ready to face whatever comes in the day with enthusiasm. It’s truly meaningful and important for me!;;… … In a word, even if doing housework is just a little deed, it contributes to making me become an all-round student by helping me know more about life. 在第三段中作者总结了做家务的体会，升华了文章主题。;… … … As my summer vacation is coming, I can’t wait to do everything within my capability for my family. 在第四段中，作者用简短的语言谈论了自己的暑假打算。;总体点评;良好范文; Every family is filled with different kinds of housework. Mom cleans the floor every other day, and does the laundry and all the other housework on weekends. Sometimes I help in the kitchen, doing some cutting, cooking or washing. 在第一段中，作者点明写作主题，讲述了自己在家帮助父母所做的一些家务活，但是仅停留在列举上，语言描述不够饱满。 ;… Housework is tiring as well as boring, so it must be much harder for the parents coming home after a whole day’s busy work. Therefore, I think it’s time for me to learn to do more things for our family. 在第二段中，作者说明做家务活很辛苦，但是如果能结合自身，谈谈帮父母做家务活后的感受就更好了。;… … I’m planning to clean the plates after each meal and water the flowers in the summer vacation. I hope I’ll make my parents feel proud of me. 在第三段中，作者清楚具体地表述了自己在暑假中打算为父母做哪些家务活。;总体点评;合格范文; Every family has lots of housework, and we should learn to do it. At home, I usually help my parents to do some housework, such as washing clo