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作文其实并不需要花费太多的时间去复习，就到最后一段时间准备模板就好。我听过几个老师的讲座，也看过很多作文书，其实老师讲的或者书上都差不多。在模板中我们要运用各种手法长难句，运用对比、举例，发表观点、提出措施等等。以下是个人心得总结 作文章法 话题keeping pets 写作分析：第一段 第一句：引出现象 第二句：引出例子或原因 第三或四句： 阐述例子 It is universally acknowledge that keeping pets is increasingly popular nowadays. There are a variety of examples illustrating this phenomenon . For one thing, there are a growing number of pet hospitals . For another , more and more pet foods are available in supermakets . 第二段 第一句:引出原因 第二或第三句 ：阐述原因 There are enormous numbers of factors that can be easily found ,but the following ones are sufficient. The fact is mainly attribute to the factor that pets can reduce people’s loneliness. It also results from the factor that pets bring happiness. 第三段 第一句作评论 第二三句做出分析 第四句 展望未来 As far as I am concerned , keeping pets will give rise to a host of problems . On one hand ,pets make noise that we can not bear ; one the other hand . it is waste of money in that we have to buy special foods .In conclusion ,it seems to me that keeping pets will fail to be popular in the future . 点评方法 ： 1 开头多变化，文章里面的开头变化多样 1 )形式主义it 开头 2 )there be 结构开头。 3 )介词开头 in conclusion 此外还有 4) 从句开头 如 if 引导的从句 5)动词分词开头 6)名词开头 开头还可以使用谚语或引言 2 个别句子复杂化 方法 找名词加定语从句 找逻辑加因果关系 如文章中的On one hand ,pets make noise that we can not bear （定从） it is waste of money in that we have to buy special foods .In conclusion ( in that 因为) 越来越多的词组替换 被increasingly a growing numbers enormous of 代替more and more 许多的替换 a variety of a host of 总结：单词的力量不及词组的力量，建议多用 给分单词 illustrating 代替explain factor 代替reason Attribute 代替reason reduce (减少) mainly attribute : 副词加动词（给分点）也就是动词前加副词 另外 名词前加形容词 如 many people------- the overwheming majority of people 再者 of +名词= 形容词 如 important ------ of great importance 7展望未来 8句子 1） 如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. ： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2）转折 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin