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Giving advice Writing 1. Review how to express advice. 2. Polish a paragragh. 3. Write a paragragh. Tasks 1.Why not (do) … 2.Why don’t you (do) … 3.You’d better (do) … 4.You should /can/could/need (do) … 5.How / What about doing ? 6.Would you mind doing… 7.You are supposed to (do) … 8.If I were you, I would (do) … 9.V-ing …is helpful. 10.It’s helpful for you to (do)…… 11.It’s a good idea for you to (do)…… Topic 1: learn English Topic 2: relax Alice， I feel more and more stressed out in Junior Three. First, I study hard, but I still can’t get good grades. Then, I often have headaches and feel sleepy, so I can’t concentrate on my study. Besides, my parents don’t understand me at all. They always think I’m wasting time. Sometimes I even argue with them. That makes us unhappy. Do you have the same problems? I need your help. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours, Liu Ming ① ② ③ … First of all, you can ask teachers for help. Second, you can take exercise. In my opinion, taking exercise can make you to energetic because you won’t feel sleepy. It’s helpful to your health. It’s helpful to your study. Third, you can get a part time job and make some money. Finally, you’d better to understand your parents. …. 1.要点：齐全enough 2.内容：建议合理、具说服力 reasonable / 3.结构：文段连贯、逻辑 4. 语法：标点词句准确correct 5. 语言：词句多样 colorful convincing coherent/logical Letter 1: … In my teacher’s eyes, I am certainly a good student in English learning. I listen in class and finish homework in time. But I’m not happy with the results… Letter 2: … I like watching TV in my free time. I don’t like going out to exercise. I also like eating potatoes and drinking cola while I am watching TV. I am fat now and I have few friends. Could you give me some advice?... Dear ________, I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now. I can understand your feeling. Don’t worry. Her