英语议论文写作指导(对比分析---正反观点).pptVIP

Practice in class 面对繁重的高中学习任务，高中生对参加学校活动 有着不同的看法，请以Taking Part in School Activities 为题，用英文写一篇120词左右的短文，着重介绍两种 不同的观点和态度，最后谈谈你个人的看法。 ▲很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识， 又可以得到放松； ▲不少学生漠不关心，认为学生就应该学习，学校活 动与学习无关，同时嘲讽积极参加学校活动的学生。 标题和开头已给，不计入总词数。词数；120词左右。 Taking Part in School Activities As for school activities, students mainly hold two views． Main errors 1.时态：现在的时态 2. There are many students support it. There are many students who support it. There are many students supporting it 3. 要有清晰的、完整的句子的痕迹 Those in favor of…think it is good for us. Because it can help us get relaxed. Main errors Those in favor of…think it is good for us, because it can help us get relaxed. Those in favor of…think it is good for us. It is because it can help us get relaxed. 清晰的句子的痕迹 It can help us make many friends, they will give us many proposer. It can help us make many friends. They will give us many proposer. It can help us make many friends, and they will give us many proposer. Main errors Taking Part in School Activities As for school activities, students mainly hold two views. Many students are very enthusiastic about school activities because they think that learning from textbooks is not their only task and they should take any chance to get some practical knowledge. Besides, after long hours’ study, they can relax themselves by participating in school activities. 议论文写作指导 对比分析 正反观点 正反观点对比 对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。写作方式一般采用集中比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章： 正反观点对比常用句型 (1) We have a( heated) discussion about… 我们对……进行了一次讨论。 We’ve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. (2) We have had a survey on… 我们对……开展了一次调查。 We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools. (3) Opinions are divided on the question. 在这个问题上